Hello Siu my name is Emma, I really like your acrostic poem. It is really cool how you did it about food.I also like how your asking people for a Apple pie please and then saying Lets eat it sounds really good together kinda like your talking to real people. Maybe you could put some photos on next time.
Bulla Siu my name is Angelina and I go to grey main School. I really like the acrostic poem you did. I like how you put in bright corlers on the writing and the apple.
Why did you pick to do a apple? Next time you could do a object.
Kia ora my name is Kash from Grey Main School I like your blog post on a apple poem. I have made a lot of poems from my school journey. Maybe next time you can write same words on top of the post?. Great work.
Hello Siu my name is Emma, I really like your acrostic poem. It is really cool how you did it about food.I also like how your asking people for a Apple pie please and then saying Lets eat it sounds really good together kinda like your talking to real people. Maybe you could put some photos on next time.
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Bulla Siu my name is Angelina and I go to grey main School. I really like the acrostic poem you did. I like how you put in bright corlers on the writing and the apple.
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Did you notice the on P it spells Pie
Kia ora my name is Kash from Grey Main School I like your blog post on a apple poem. I have made a lot of poems from my school journey. Maybe next time you can write same words on top of the post?. Great work.
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